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Monday, July 6, 2015

The Visitor: a short story that will not visit young adults’ shelves


Zombies, aliens and monsters are characters generally categorized as appealing for teenagers. But do they really enjoy all the stories in which these creatures appear? In fact, it is not like that. For parents, teachers and adults in general it is difficult to find a suitable book for adolescents. In order to choose which the appropriate stories for them are, we can consider as a reference the characteristics introduced by Robert C. Small Jr. He is the head of Radford University, and wrote about YAL in an article entitled “The Literary Value of the Young Adult Novel” in 1992. The acronym YAL refers to literature written specially for adolescents.  Small grouped certain elements that should be taken into account when classifying stories for teenagers.

As adults, we should know that not all novels and books are appealing for adolescents. For example, “The Visitor,” a short story written by Jack Ketchum, definitely does not follow Small’s characteristics. In this short story, Will, the protagonist, is an old man who is married to Beatrice. This woman is bitten by a zombie and then she is hospitalized. Will starts to visit her wife and to tell her memorable anecdotes about their past together.
As human beings, we generally tend to identify ourselves with what we read. Teenagers might do it in a higher degree because they are shaping their personality. For this reason, they will probably not feel the desire of reading something they cannot identify with. According to Small, the main character of the story is a teenager who is usually perceptive, sensitive, intelligent, mature and independent. The first controversy that “The Visitor” presents is that the main character is an old man and not an adolescent. This is one of the reasons why this story might not be appealing for young adults.

When selecting a story we should take into account what Small says about the main character. He/she is a teenager, and also the center of the plot. His/her dialogues reflect teenager’s speech, including slang. In “The Visitor” there is only one character who is an adolescent, but she does not speak. Also, Will, the protagonist, shows difficulties to speak to this young adult. When he is at the hospital, he observes her lying on a bed, and it is problematic for him to find out the way of talking to her. He solves this problem reading a magazine for her. This scene exemplifies the difficulties Will faces when communicating with young adults and also the lack of teenager’s participation. This is another reason why teenagers will probably not be engaged when reading this story.

Taking into account Hertz and Gallo’s proposal, the theme of a young adult novel or story should be appealing for YA. It is important to mention that the central topic of “The Visitor” is a zombie apocalypse. While reading this story, the author describes that Will and his wife Beatrice have to face an unexpected problem when the old woman is beaten by a zombie-friend in her collarbone. We could predict that this story will fulfill teenager’s expectations. However, the sadness and nostalgia that the author transmits deliciously, seems to change the target audience from teens to adults, focusing on deeper emotions rather than on blood and innards.


In conclusion, it is difficult for adults to find out if a story is meant for adolescents or not. In order to identify this, we have to pay attention not only to the topics and characters in the story, but also to the manner it is written. We can consider that even though zombies appear in “The Visitor,” this fact does not make it appealing for teenagers. For the reasons previously mentioned, this story cannot be proposed as a case of YAL. Not all literary texts are addressed for teens, but luckily we can follow the features that Small provided us with to fulfill their needs and expectations.

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