WRONG SENTENCE:
These topics, among others, in addition to the protagonist’s traits, would make this story appealing for young adults, what leads us to the concept of Young Adult Literature (YAL).
Here I’m not able to use ‘what’ since I needed a
relative pronoun such as ‘which’ or ‘that’ to introduce the following relative
clause. The word ‘what’ may introduce:
ª Exclamations: What a fool she is!
ª Interrogatives: What do you want?
ª Pseudo-cleft sentences: What you need most is a good rest.
RIGHT SENTENCE:
These topics, among others, in addition to the protagonist’s traits,would make this story appealing for young adults, which leads us to the concept of Young Adult Literature (YAL).
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